Tone Writing 1:

This need to happen now, for you have waited for the actually last moment. This has been put off for at least a week now and now it’s time for you to take the responsibility of it. This is the most important thing in the class this year and what did you do, you blew it. You have known about this assignment for some time now but no you put the Xbox and your phone ahead of it. All you had to do Harrison was write 2 pages about the class.

It’s like every other project, it’s the night before its due or it’s the day of that you finish it Harrison, but now there are no excuses. I have been reminding you at 6:30 sharp every night to do this simple task, for it is your entire grade this year. Now you have the biggest, hardest and most tedious task to complete, but you don’t remember.

Tone Writing 2:

You have never been so scared in your life Spence, whenever I’ve fallen you picked me and no matter the challenge before picking yourself up. You played with a broken wrist and stepped up for coach when he needed someone, now look at yourself, scared to look at him. He hit you, you need to hit him back. It’s me Spence what would you do if you were the reason you little brother got hurt. Mom and dad say you have the responsibility and courage to do whatever I say you can.

It’s not just for me bro, it’s for you entire reputation. You get hit and go down, I get hit twice hobble and fall down. That’s not like you, you have the heart of a lion and are willing to do anything for the family. Opa said he saw something special in you but right now I see a coward hiding in the protection of his injured brother. You have to get up and show him and the entire world that you are NOT a joke.