
My poem
By Luca Libralato, San Felice Circeo lazio, Italy What a sight!
Good night city
Good night place
I’ll see you again when the sky’s awake
Over the ocean
Quiet breeze
Fill the air oh pretty please
Just wait — hold on
Don’t move
When the sun comes up I’ll be there soon
Good night moon
I’ll see you soon
Tomorrow when I’m awake I’ll be with you
In my poem ” Good Night Moon”, I created a story in which the speaker is going to sleep after a long day. See is saying good night hoping she will see everything again when she wakes up. The theme of my poem is when something bad happens everything is not over. This is inspired by when you go to sleep you say goodbye but soon you wake up to say hello. I used a few poetic techniques Including rhyme with the breeze and please. I also used some rhythm with the syllables matching 4,4,10.

I like the rhyme that is in your poem and the rhythm.